We interviewed with some teachers about classroom management. I uploaded the interviews. This is a qualitative study but it’s not in the best quality. We need to change some parts and add more information. 
-First, the references are insufficient. We need to change the references and they should have 3 or more references. 
-The title should be change. After you check the interview questions and answers, you can come up with better title.
-The introduction and literature review should be more related to the topic of the study and we need to talk about what this study is about in these sections. So, We need to be more clear for those sections. 
-After literature review part, we need to add research question or hypothesis. You can check the interview questions and find research question or hypothesis
-We should add more information in the results and findings part. 
-we should make suggestions to future research based on our findings.
-We need to add connection to literature in discussion section. 
-So, this study is missing so many things. We need to improve it.

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